Ms. O'Halloran

Creative Writing


*This page will be used to create a class story. Each group will have a day where they need to go and add at least one paragraph to where the story left off.*

"Shh...be quiet!" quietly hissed the teenage girl to her boyfriend that was a full head taller than she was. He had been sneering and muttering under his breath as they walked through the ominious dark hallway at the abandoned high school. It was a Tuesday night around one in the morning and they had been wandering through the woods completly lost for about four hours now. They were both exhausted. The girl, Sara, who was currently sixteen years old and had curly red hair, hazel eyes, and a nice smile was clutching Jacob, her eighteen year old boyfriend's arm in fear while simultaneously leading the way through the dilapidated building trying to figure out a way home.
"I still don't understand why we even came here in the first place" he grumbled. "Because I wanted to.You know how I love haunted places." she replied. He 'hmph'd and kept following her. "Are you hungry or something? You're awfully crabby" Sara asked, keeping her voice low. "Now that you mention it..." her irked boyfriend mused; Sara sighed. The pair kept walking randomly through the school's hallways until Jacob stiffened and clutched Sara close to his strong body. "What?" she hissed. He shushed her immediately and strained his ears to pick up the sound that had alerted him to another presence seconds ago.
"That sound, it sounds like its coming from that room over there." Jacob sounded petrified. "Quick!" Sarah screamed and he tightened his gripped on her."Let's go see what it is!" "Ya how about no." I really just want to go home now. Jacob thought to himself. "What do you mean you want to go home?" Sarah hates being able to hear his thoughts and only his thoughts. She thinks its the worst thing in the world. Sarah was so excited to go see what the noise was. She practically ran to the room leaving Jacob standing alone in the hallway. She opened the door and looked around. No one was there. The dark room left an ominous feeling in her bones. The wind blew in threw the old crackling window.The dusty table tops and chairs looked warn. The room was an old biology room.The back had been filled with microscopes and dissecting equipment. Why is the window open? Sara thought to herself. The noise echoed in the room again. Jacob quietly asked "Could we just go home now? I'll buy you some hot wings or something if we go now..." The noise broke the silence once more and Jacob clutched onto Sara. Sara looked around and found a locked cabinet. She put her ear against it gently. "I think something is in here. I hear scratching." A deep ARRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO came from inside the cabinet. Sara quickly pulled out a bobby pin from her hair and used Jacob's prize Swiss army knife and unlocked the cabinet. A huge ferocious wolf-dog pounced out and starred at Jacob and Sara contently waiting for their next move.

Once Sara and Jacob both stopped being so scared, they realized that it was a motorized coyote. Someone had put that in the cabinet to keep people out of there. "Really tho?" Sara said with a devilish smile on her face. Jacob turns around to see that his girlfriend has grown fangs and that she just put the coyote in there to distract him. How was Jacob supposed to respond? His girlfriend of two years was turning into a vampire. She wanted to drink from him. He stood there, feeling like his life was flashing before his eyes, but as soon as she went to go and drink from him she was impaled by a arrow in her back.`

"sara what is happening to you?" Jacob said scared, not knowing what to do. " I should explain, but it's hard to now when all i want to do is suck your blood."sara said blood thirsty, and walking towards jacob with crazy eyes. Jacob thought to himself what to do.. she was blocking the door so he couldnt get out, the window was open but Jacob was to big for it. Sara moved closer to Jacob. Jacob steped back every time Sara steped foward. "Sara, please stop, this is crazy." "Jacob, i wish i could but i can't this is a curse brought upon my family years and years ago.

"Curse?? What curse??" questioned Jacob as he continued to back away from his once human girlfriend, now transforming right before his eyes. He couldn't help but wonder why he wasn't informed of this curse earlier. So much for honesty and trust in relationships. Suddenly, Jacob's thoughts were interrupted by the sense of warm air breathing on the back of his neck. He jumped and quickly turned around, finding himself face to face with a skeleton, dressed in a work suit and wearing glasses, and resembling an old teacher. The figure looked so familiar, Jacob thought, but the extremely aged skeleton prevented Jacob from completely jogging his memory.

The skeleton spoke with a ghoulish voice, it's putrid breath rushing past Jacob's face as he did so. "How dare you bring that horrid creature into my school?" You think she's the horrid one? thought Jacob, you should see yourself. But this was no time to make jokes. "...Your school?" Jacob looked at Sara, who was standing behind him, and did a double take. She was crouched on the ground, on all fours, a most ferocious look on her face. She looked like she was ready to pounce on the ancient skeleton. Her pose scared him, and he involuntarily took a step backwards. "Yes, this is my school." The skeleton moved sideways, away from both Sara, still watching him with a menacing glare in her eyes, and Jacob, who was planted to the ground in fear. "You have invaded what, many years ago, used to be my classroom. It was mine, that is, until one of her"--he pointed to Sara, and she cringed as he did so--"her fellow bloodsuckers ruined my career... and my life."


At that moment Sara leaped into the air, jaws open wide, teeth like crocodile ready to grip upon the first thing they could touch. She landed on the skeleton ripping away bone after bone, dismembering him into nothing but dog scraps. "Now’s my chance, while she is picking her teeth with him, I can make a run for it." Jacob thought while walking slowly to the door. Jacob opened the door and ran as fast as the wind. His only thought was to escape the horrible scene that was now locked in his mind. Unfortunately, his run alone was briefly lived, and changed into a chase. His thoughts raced, thoughts of his crazy psycho vampire girlfriend made him image that she was right be hide him, nipping at his heels. Toying with his only thought and only chance of escape. “I have to keep running, don’t look back Jacob, don’t look back.” he thought to himself. He ducked into the nearest room to catch his breath. Fortunately, she was not be hide him and he found his self in the cafeteria. He suddenly felt light-headed. He fell to the marble floor with a "Thud". When he woke up there were bright lights everywhere. "HELLO, HELLO?!" He screamed. "HE-""Yes, dear? im here." A woman said, as she stepped into view. "AHHHHHHHH ! HELP ME, SOMEBODY COME QUICKLY !" He screamed after the woman stepped into the light. It was Sara.She Smirked and stuck her fangs out for Jacob to see. He just stared in horror, as he saw his whole life flash before her eyes. the woman he thought was the best thing that ever happened to him, turned out to be a blood thirsty vampire. she swung her body back like a cheetah getting ready to pounce and attack. Her muscles tigghtened and contracted, her eyes turned red, she began to salivate."KNOCK KNOCK" "Open up please its the nurse, its time for mr.Jones' hourly anti-biotics.""You better not say a word, they'll only drug you up more and put into the loonie bin. Okay?" Sara whispered. "Okay." Jacob agreed. Sara went to open the door, and let the nurse in.
The nurse was a beautiful, young, elegant woman. She wore, what normal nurses at the hospital wore, blue scrubs. She walked around with a clip board in her left hand and a blue pen in her right hand. Attached to the clipboard was a few pieces of paper. The nurse would write down a few notes every so often to inform the doctors what was going on with their patients. The patients' blood pressure, their heart rate, a list of the food they ate and drinks they drank throughout the day were just a couple things she would write down.
Jacob really liked his nurse. He could not help but stare at her when she walked in. Jacob read her name tag, "Amanda." he said aloud. He realized he said something when she answered. "Yes?" Amanda said. Jacob continued to stare at her. He had nothing to say.
"SNAP OUT OF IT!" Sara said as she snapped her fingers in Jacob's face. He quickly jumped and stopped gazing at the pretty nurse who stood in front of him. He wanted to think of a plan to escape but he knew sara could read his thoughts. Jacob figured if he could get her to focus on something else eh could make an escape. He wriggled his body around and knocked over all the monitors. "CRAP JAKE" sara shrieked furiously. As she helped the nurse pick up the monitors jacob ran for it. He bursted through large doors into the library. At the end he saw another set of doors which seemed to be glowing. He was hesistant to go through them, but figured the farther he ran the farther he would be away from Sara. He nearly flew through the doors and then...He was in his room laying on his bedroom floor in his underwear clenching his blanket like a baby.
"MAN ! that was the scariest dream i ever had." he thought that watching True Blood before bed was a bad idea. Sara walked in and said "Yea, you really shouldnt watch scary tv shows before you sleep." how did she know what i was thinking? He had heard about people having dreams that come true but he didnt think anything of it. was this what was happening? Was Sara really a vampire? "Why yes i am jacob!" Sara said in a eerie, decrepit voice.

Jacob was so scared and confused and didnt know what to do. He still wasnt sure if sara was definatly a vampire or not. So after the nightmare he watched a funny tv show so he would be able to go back to bed. As he was watching spongebob squarepants he fell right asleep and didnt wake up till the next morning. He still was not positive if sara was a vampire or not.

The next morning Jacob was still shaken up. "What do i do? Should i run or confront her myselft.Those dreams might mean something like a warning. " he said while trying to eat his ceral. Then he made his decision to meet up with her. The whole day Jacob is still shaken up. 1 hour before his meet-up with sara he googled all of the things that vampires can't go near. So he geared up for his date with sara and went out the door.